The blog I read was "Guidelines that helped me for students and new grads". This blog relates to my future because it is my future. I will be a new grad and will be applying for jobs as an RN. The theme of entries on this blog is help and support. A lot of them are about how to deal with certain issues with being a nurse and obstacles that can and will occur. The audience of the blog seems to be new nurses and nurses that are trying to get a few pointers and are researching.
This blog was very helpful. She was very clear on the point she was trying to make and with helping people. It was an easy read for the most part. There were many misspelled words however which took me back for a second. It made me question her qualifications for a minute. Although some words were either misspelled or misused, it was a good read and made me very excited for my future and a nurse.
This blog was a lot better because it had more information and gave personal opinions and was more of a help read. However, the other blog was easier to read because it was written in bullet points and was all spelled correctly.
This made me want to write some "how to" or blogs that will help people in the long run that I have much experience with. This was a great blog and I appreciated the way she wants to help others succeed!
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ReplyDeleteI had a few changes to make to my comment...sorry for the inconvenience. :)
DeleteCarli, I really enjoyed your post about being ready for graduation and how it leads into a successful career. I am also ready for graduation, and ready to get into my field of work. College life is nice, but is very hard at times as we seem to struggle with many obstacles.
ReplyDeleteAfter looking at this blog you wrote about in your post, I completely see where she misspelled many words. It is very frustrating to read things like this with bad spelling, improper punctuation, and grammatical errors.
I don't mean to sound mean by saying this, but I have one constructive criticism remark on your blog. When you say "she", some people may not know who "she" is. Common sense, yes, of course would tell the audience of your blog that it was the author, but for purposes of writing, and from what I have learned in my few writing classes that I have taken over the years, is that you need to introduce the person before you use pronouns such as "she", "they", etc.
Love reading your blogs